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A Blazing Friendship: Page 22

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Instead of coloring with colored pencils as usual, I digitally colored this page.
What do you think? Do you like the smooth digital colors? Or did you like it better when I gave the ponies more texture with my colored pencils? The next page will have the coloring in the style the most people like!

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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

You know, as much as I'd hate to I'm probably going to come off as being decisively mean. If only because the writer part of me is clawing and gnawing.

The primary thing I have on this is quite purely the story. Human in Equestria stories have lost their flare on me and seem to be sort of desperate grabs at being a part of the world.

Compounding this is what comes off to me as likely being something of a self insert in that regard, at least judging by the cutiemark. I've seen a whole lot of art based cutie marks. Almost as much as grabs to arcane magic cutie marks. It's just gotten goofy and generic.

Stylistically, you've got a ways to develop it, and I'd recommend working on amending the proportions to being closer to show style. I can understand it if you're trying to find a more original build than Generic Colt #20 but I can poise a few proportional issues regarding the body: it seems too smashed.


Thou requested a critique, thou received.